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Everything, I can't get beyond the original idea, I can't flesh it out at all, and when I try it just feels so forced.
The characters are good, but taking it further? It's nearly impossible, I can't make it work. That and I get bored with them, and I'm only trying to do short stories.
The characters are good, but taking it further? It's nearly impossible, I can't make it work. That and I get bored with them, and I'm only trying to do short stories.